Comments on 'Without Fail'
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|Sofia Lindström||What an introduction to the Empire! At least this piece of it. You made the warsailors' lives fascinating to glimpse into and I love the friends-from-enemies situation with Brelig and Alaaffi. I'll confess I'm still not a 100% on how licenses work in the Empire, but I understood enough from this story to follow along and get how much of a Big Thing Brelig getting that last license was. Many kudos!|
|Amelia Margetts||Featured in LJ Community's Writing Spotlight 10-18-2011! Again 5-7-13!|
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