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Comments on 'Madness'

Please note: These comments are the personal opinons of members, and do not represent any sort of official judgement, even if they are made by people in club management.  Everyone deserves respect for their creativity; but if you find a critical comment on one of your works, please don't take it personally.  On the other hand, personal attacks are not tolerated and any comment containing them will be deleted as soon as we discover it!

Holly H.Oh my! Oh no! Fascinating from start to finish. Oranaan’s friends were depicted very vividly, and it was interesting to get a glimpse of scientists who clearly have had some success, but who weren’t *brilliant* in the way that Oranaan is, or even solid and reliable the way others I’ve seen are. But it’s just as interesting to see people who allow theories and politics and paranoia to lead their thinking astray. *Of course* someone would decide that it was all a conspiracy, man-made, and try to prove it! But even if I hadn’t already known that these events are due to the Others, and the Others are… something strange and otherworldly, I wouldn’t have believed that this problem was man-made at all. Even suspecting that Rilaru’s death was coming, it was still a shock when it did -- not to mention how close Oranaan came to it himself! I’m not very impressed with Mlamani, and wonder where he will go from here, and how this will affect him.
Lorna (Comtessa)This has been a wonderful read. It shows real expression.
Ellen MillionI really like this look at Oranaan, and his sober acceptance of what happens - he may be growing up, after all!
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