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Comments on 'Genius'

Please note: These comments are the personal opinons of members, and do not represent any sort of official judgement, even if they are made by people in club management.  Everyone deserves respect for their creativity; but if you find a critical comment on one of your works, please don't take it personally.  On the other hand, personal attacks are not tolerated and any comment containing them will be deleted as soon as we discover it!

Holly H.Oh, that was fun! :D Emeroma is right, she is perhaps better at politics than she thought… or else she is simply very good at calling the bluff of bored young geniuses. I liked that her tough, wake-up-call approach was exactly what was needed, despite the over-cautious advice of her peers. (Though I have to wonder why she was given the task, in the first place? Was it really because of her being a woman and them thinking Oranaan would somehow respond to motherly qualities that you’d think they’d know Emeroma didn’t actually have?)
Rhiannon RoseOho! Science and university with politics. Nicely done. I love the clear irritation at the lazy genius. :)
Lorna (Comtessa)This is a great story! It shows more depth into the characters and how they act. It certainly inspires!
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