Torn World; Comments on 'The Brightest Star in the Sky'

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Amelia Margetts

Featured in LJ Community's Writing Spotlight 6-24-14!

Non-Member Artist

As a theology scholar I have to congratulate on the very, very accurate feel of this myth. It is very similar to many of the northern myths I've read about the beginning of the night sky and of course also makes you think of Pandora and her forbidden Box. The animal council was wonderfully entertaining, with all the animals showing traits that fit their kind very precisely. :) I really liked this and will probably read it a few times more. It was very well written.

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